diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index e7c43fc..5dd6f1e 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
   <head>
     <meta charset="UTF-8" />
     <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0" />
-    <title>Save Victoria Way Carpark - Petition for Enterprise Place Residents</title>
-    <meta name="description" content="Sign the petition to save Victoria Way Carpark in Woking. Essential parking for Enterprise Place residents - help us show the council this community resource matters." />
+    <title>Victoria Way Carpark - Petition for Updates & Parking Solutions</title>
+    <meta name="description" content="Sign the petition asking Woking Council for regular updates on Victoria Way Carpark and proper alternative parking for Enterprise Place residents." />
     <meta name="author" content="Enterprise Place Residents" />
 
     <meta property="og:title" content="Save Victoria Way Carpark - Petition for Enterprise Place Residents" />
diff --git a/src/pages/Index.tsx b/src/pages/Index.tsx
index 31cacaf..caf2367 100644
--- a/src/pages/Index.tsx
+++ b/src/pages/Index.tsx
@@ -78,10 +78,10 @@ const Index = () => {
         
         <div className="relative z-10 max-w-4xl mx-auto px-6">
           <h1 className="text-5xl md:text-6xl font-bold text-primary-foreground mb-6">
-            Save Victoria Way Carpark
+            Victoria Way Carpark: We Need Solutions
           </h1>
           <p className="text-xl md:text-2xl text-primary-foreground/90 mb-8">
-            Don't let Woking Council take away the only parking solution for Enterprise Place residents
+            We support safety-first action, but Enterprise Place residents need communication and alternative parking solutions
           </p>
           <Button 
             size="lg" 
@@ -99,8 +99,8 @@ const Index = () => {
           <div className="grid grid-cols-1 md:grid-cols-4 gap-6">
             <StatCard icon={Home} number="120+" label="Affected Households" />
             <StatCard icon={Users} number="300+" label="Residents Impacted" />
-            <StatCard icon={Car} number="0" label="Alternative Parking Nearby" />
-            <StatCard icon={AlertTriangle} number="Daily" label="Safety Concerns" />
+            <StatCard icon={Car} number="10 min" label="Walk to Victoria Place" />
+            <StatCard icon={AlertTriangle} number="0" label="Council Updates Since Closure" />
           </div>
         </div>
       </section>
@@ -108,39 +108,46 @@ const Index = () => {
       {/* Problem Statement */}
       <section className="py-16 px-6">
         <div className="max-w-4xl mx-auto">
+          <div className="bg-secondary/10 border-l-4 border-secondary p-6 rounded-r-lg mb-8">
+            <h3 className="text-xl font-semibold text-primary mb-2">We Thank the Council for Prioritising Safety</h3>
+            <p className="text-foreground">
+              We understand that Victoria Way Carpark was closed due to safety concerns, and we fully support putting public safety first. 
+              The council made the right decision to act on these concerns.
+            </p>
+          </div>
+
           <h2 className="text-4xl font-bold text-primary mb-8 text-center">
-            The Crisis Facing Enterprise Place Residents
+            The Problems We Face Today
           </h2>
           <div className="prose prose-lg max-w-none text-foreground space-y-6">
             <p className="text-lg leading-relaxed">
-              Victoria Way Carpark has been the primary parking facility for Enterprise Place residents for years. 
-              Now, with its closure, over 300 residents face daily hardship, safety risks, and quality of life degradation.
+              However, since the closure, over 300 Enterprise Place residents have been left without communication or alternative solutions. 
+              We are asking the council to address three critical issues:
             </p>
             <div className="bg-card p-8 rounded-lg shadow-[var(--shadow-card)] border border-border">
-              <h3 className="text-2xl font-semibold text-primary mb-4">The Real Impact:</h3>
+              <h3 className="text-2xl font-semibold text-primary mb-4">What We Need:</h3>
               <ul className="space-y-3 text-foreground">
                 <li className="flex items-start">
-                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">•</span>
-                  <span>Parents struggle to transport children safely to and from home</span>
+                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">1.</span>
+                  <span><strong>Regular Updates:</strong> No information has been provided on safety surveys, remediation progress, or future plans for the site</span>
                 </li>
                 <li className="flex items-start">
-                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">•</span>
-                  <span>Elderly and disabled residents can no longer visit family easily</span>
+                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">2.</span>
+                  <span><strong>Alternative Parking:</strong> Victoria Place (10-minute walk) is the only option mentioned - no suitable alternative has been provided for residents</span>
                 </li>
                 <li className="flex items-start">
-                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">•</span>
-                  <span>Night shift workers face safety risks walking from distant parking</span>
-                </li>
-                <li className="flex items-start">
-                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">•</span>
-                  <span>Emergency vehicle access has become complicated</span>
-                </li>
-                <li className="flex items-start">
-                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">•</span>
-                  <span>Property values are declining as parking becomes impossible</span>
+                  <span className="text-accent font-bold mr-3">3.</span>
+                  <span><strong>Recognition of Impact:</strong> Parents, elderly residents, disabled individuals, and night workers face daily hardship and safety risks</span>
                 </li>
               </ul>
             </div>
+            <div className="bg-muted p-6 rounded-lg border border-border mt-6">
+              <p className="text-foreground font-medium">
+                <strong>Victoria Place is not a viable solution:</strong> A 10-minute walk each way adds 20 minutes to every journey, 
+                making it impossible for elderly residents, dangerous for parents with young children carrying shopping, 
+                and unsafe for night shift workers returning home late.
+              </p>
+            </div>
           </div>
         </div>
       </section>
@@ -179,7 +186,7 @@ const Index = () => {
             Add Your Voice
           </h2>
           <p className="text-xl text-muted-foreground mb-12">
-            Sign the petition to urge Woking Council to save Victoria Way Carpark or provide alternative parking for Enterprise Place residents
+            Sign the petition asking Woking Council to provide regular updates, proper alternative parking, and a clear plan for Enterprise Place residents
           </p>
           <PetitionForm />
         </div>
@@ -192,7 +199,7 @@ const Index = () => {
             Every Signature Counts
           </h2>
           <p className="text-lg mb-8 text-primary-foreground/90">
-            Help us show Woking Council that Victoria Way Carpark is essential to our community
+            Help us show Woking Council that Enterprise Place residents deserve communication, updates, and real parking solutions
           </p>
           <div className="flex flex-col sm:flex-row gap-4 justify-center">
             <Button 
